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Poem

Dear Diary,

I wrote a poem. I just finished today, I had begun oh so long ago. It's been a while but it's okay. :) It's titled: 'Where are you going?' I'm going to put it in my poetry section as well but here it is: (Please tell me what you think)

Where are you going?
My dear...dear friend.
Have you lost your way, once again?
I can help if you let me.
Just hold my hand,
and I'll walk with thee.

Where are you going?
The road is so dark.
There are no guides, no marks.
The crows are waiting along the side.
Please don't worry,
I'll be your guide.

Where are you going?
The sky looks so torn.
Thousands of crowded stars adorned.
The moon is carrying a tear.
Stop your complaining,
She still can't hear.

Where are you going?
These tears are real
Regardless of what they say time won't heal.
There are too many clouds, I can't see.
Hold me close,
And comfort me.

Where are you going?
Did you cross the road alone?
I can hear the breezes moan.
I thought we'd voyage together.
Stop running away,
I thought you wanted me forever.

Where are you going?
My dear...dear friend.
I think you lose me once again.
There is no help for you and me.
I don't need your hand,
And I won't walk with thee.

...dull? Trite? Cliche? I need somme thoughts on this.

With care,
Mayms

9:34 p.m. - 2002-07-04

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